second draft FRONT COVER

here is a second draft i created taking the criticisms of my first into consideration. I changed the front as i feel that this font is more suited to the genre and many people said that my previous font was more suited to the pop genre. I added more black into the front cover again to emphisise the indie genre. however, i kept the overall layout and placing the same as many people liked the overall look of my front cover. I again asked people for feed back in order to help me create my final front cover.

'the font change was idea and it looks more like an indie magazine now, but i'd maybe change the font on some of the sell lines to make them clearer to read.'

'i like the name signature more than pure and the black title is more effective.'

'there's nothing i would change, i think its really good!' 

'maybe put the title behind the balloons, alot of magazines do that.'

although there was not many things people wanted me to change, i will still go away and play with the placing of the title and the colour of the font untill i am happy with my final draft.